Mar. 26th, 2008

Annotations, page 5&6

Quick notes for those who like them, though it will all come out in the comic itself eventually:

The fuzzy longtails don't have a species name for themselves; but everyone else calls them Osea. No one pronounces it the same way, but my spellcheck don't care, and it's shorter than writing out "fuzzy things" every time I mention them. So Osea it is after this. They're trooping scavengers, and live in groups of one or more family. Families consist of one sexually mature couple and their offspring. Sexual maturity is another topic for another day, but it's not age based.

Osea are, to oversimplify a bit,mildly empathic, with other sentient beings as well as each other. It's not something that most of them notice most of the time, in the way that understanding symbols isn't something that most humans think about most of the time, even though you're doing it right now. It's just a thing they do, and it mostly doesn't amount to more than a general awareness that other troop members are about and more or less ok. It keeps groups calm and generally affectionate towards each other. But when somebody's really worked up, it can override their individual emotional states to some degree. Panic is pretty contagious.

Kehl aren't leaders,that falls to the breeding pair, especially the mother. They're sort of a cross between counselors and mind cops. They're sensitive enough to pick up more subtle and specific impressions, sometimes at a good distance. Anyone born with that level of sensitivity has to have Kehl training, or they pretty much lose their personal selves in the overload. Those who take to it learn to separate their personal feelings from everyone else's, usually by keeping their own emotions very very stable. They're the ones who generally deal with non-Osea in less isolated tribes, and with disturbed members of the group.

Those who are born hypersensitive, but can't learn that self control fast enough... are a different, and not happy, story.

Mehrn is young, and has pretty good self control, but she hasn't got a handle on the practical end of her duties yet. Taking a crazy guy back to the group's main lair is not smart. Nehn is trying to be nice about this.

Feb. 20th, 2008

Nest annotations, page 3

Top panel: These three pages have made me very happy. So sad I have to start making an actual story happen. Oh, well, the wordless pages and layout fun were nice while they lasted.

Also: Hi, Mehrn! I need to start putting names to my characters actually in the story. It's just that it feels incredibly forced, and takes up room, and argh. Names will be revealed eventually! I swear!

I am working on it.

Note that she grabs the bag with the food in it. These are ravenous little creatures, and leaving food behind Does Not Happen.

Last panel: Yes, Chren was the runt.Osea have those. It hasn't affected his current size, and none of the younger ones see him as having any problems. But Mehrn's from,essentially, the same litter, so she'll always think of him as the runt, the same way an older sibling might think of their little sister as "the baby" even though she's six feet tall and 35 years old. Family.

Also: New Old way of doing the text here. Opinions?