| carapace ( @ 2008-02-20 02:37:00 |
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| Entry tags: | annotations, comics, nest |
Nest annotations, page 3
Top panel: These three pages have made me very happy. So sad I have to start making an actual story happen. Oh, well, the wordless pages and layout fun were nice while they lasted.
Also: Hi, Mehrn! I need to start putting names to my characters actually in the story. It's just that it feels incredibly forced, and takes up room, and argh. Names will be revealed eventually! I swear!
I am working on it.
Note that she grabs the bag with the food in it. These are ravenous little creatures, and leaving food behind Does Not Happen.
Last panel: Yes, Chren was the runt.Osea have those. It hasn't affected his current size, and none of the younger ones see him as having any problems. But Mehrn's from,essentially, the same litter, so she'll always think of him as the runt, the same way an older sibling might think of their little sister as "the baby" even though she's six feet tall and 35 years old. Family.
Also: New Old way of doing the text here. Opinions?